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Post by Memorie on Jun 12, 2006 12:53:26 GMT -5
"Treated him worse than a drudge." ~It's not a bad thing to be a drudge. And most Southern Holds don't treat drudges badly. Most drudges are fully competent people, and they are the true workings of the hold. So why treat them badly? Now, Holdless Men are treated badly. Thieves are treated badly. But not most drudges. Oh, and name the Hold that took him in. It's important.
"The dragonriders were young." --Referring to the Searchriders. ~The Weyrs don't really let the younger riders do Searchriding, because they haven't really learned to control their tempers.
"Hatching Date: (? I don’t see one that would coincide with his age.)" ~Consider making him a year older or younger, then.
You write beautifully, and I love your style. I tend to be a bit nit-picky, but there's my two cents. Welcome to LW!
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Post by may on Jun 12, 2006 13:25:42 GMT -5
Okay done. Thank you for the nice compliment, I appreciate it. May
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Post by Dizzy on Jun 12, 2006 17:57:41 GMT -5
i approve save for the fact that Talmah is beholden to Sodalis Weyr. we just need to pick a wing for him. We have Sidus, Luna, Helios, and Desta. rank would be wingrider.
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Post by E on Jun 12, 2006 18:13:52 GMT -5
*smiles* I knew you'd be approved fast May. Now what age about did you want for your dragon? Thats the easiest way to find a clutch. Then we can just give or take a year like Memorie said. Once we get that in there we'll have him comepletely approved. *smiles*
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Post by may on Jun 12, 2006 19:55:57 GMT -5
*Sporfles* I didn't notice that mistake, I'm sorry, *ducks head* I fixed it and a few other errors that I noticed. I just didn't notice it for the words. May I have Helio's wing. And the dragon age about 5 or 6 should do it. Really whatever you think is best. I just posted L'nai's sheet he impressed at 13 (which can be changed)and he has the same delemma. I would like it if possible for Aroneth to be a year older than Jeseneth, but again whatever works is fine. Also if I may, I'd like L'nai to be in Helio's wing too. Thank you, May
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Post by E on Jun 12, 2006 20:24:08 GMT -5
*smiles* Helios is my wing. I went and reread his personality and I can see him having a position in Helios. I think I can manage that for your brown rider. Let me reread thru the green one again and I'llg et back to you on him. but yes, K'wren is welcome in Helios. Is it important to you to have both of them in the same wing? Just curious, but I"ll see what i can do. *goes to reread your green*
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Post by may on Jun 12, 2006 20:36:31 GMT -5
*Smiles* Thank you so much!!! I love E'mion with his covert ways. It's important for L'nai and K'wren to be together only in the sense that they can discuss things that are imprtant to both being in the same wing and all. And maybe they can help out on the spying and stuff to integrate the Weyrs back into the north **mwahhhh** No really, *grin* they are good wingriders and follow orders well. But no, they're just a dragon's /between/ away from each other and they do talk about everything with each other just like any "married" couple would. So whatever you think is best for the game is good for me. Thanks E
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Post by E on Jun 13, 2006 16:26:18 GMT -5
I love you Siggy May. *grins*
Okay I was going to put your brown in Helios and green in Sidus... but then I realized that Helios wing is leaving for Muneo weyr for four to five turns before they give up the weyr because of threadfall... Sidus is not going... I dont' think you wanted them split up half a world away for four to five turns...do you?
I think it might just be safe to put you both in Sidus or Desta or something of the sort. *blush* Sorry that little bit missed my mind. I have a bad habit of thinking about things like that after the fact. heh...
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Post by may on Jun 13, 2006 16:32:30 GMT -5
Thanks, I like it too.
Keep them together and whatever Weyr is fine.
Thanks,
May
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Post by may on Jun 14, 2006 12:43:55 GMT -5
K'wren and L'nai want to know when they can play?
Thanks
May
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Post by E on Jun 14, 2006 15:25:52 GMT -5
Make them both Siduis riders at Lateo Weyr and you can go ahead and play them. Sorry I didn't mention that earlier. *grins* Your in the Weyrleaders wing. Both are approved and I'll move them when I get spare time to fiddle with it.
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Post by may on Jun 14, 2006 20:07:17 GMT -5
Thank you!
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