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Post by hrsegrl245 on Jun 1, 2007 6:42:46 GMT -5
(please delete)
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Drache
Ordered Chaos
aka Ms. Picky
Enchanting my every waking dream...
Posts: 641
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Post by Drache on Jun 2, 2007 15:24:48 GMT -5
2nd paragraph of History:
Weaver Craft. Crafters.
4th:
Impressed. Impress. Hatching Sands. Please go through your profiles and capitalize the words that should be.
5th:
Dragon speech in bold.
7th:
Capitalizations needed.
9th:
Capitalizations needed.
10th:
Thread.
Dragon description: Thread. Why is she in pain when she Hatches? Capitalizations needed.
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Post by hrsegrl245 on Jun 2, 2007 17:50:36 GMT -5
Hope I got everything and cleared up the mix up with Naraleth. She wasn't in pain but was inflicting it on Candidates.  Sorry about the gramatical errors. |
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